When I was born, A Woman was there to hold me: My Mother
As I grew up, A woman was there to care & play with me: My Sister
I went to school, A Woman was there to help me learn: My Teacher
I got depressed when I lost, A Woman was there to offer a shoulder: My Girlfriend
I needed a companionship & love, A Woman was there for me: My Wife
I became tough, A Woman was there to melt me: My Daughter
When I will die, A Woman will be there to absorb me in: My Motherland
As I grew up, A woman was there to care & play with me: My Sister
I went to school, A Woman was there to help me learn: My Teacher
I got depressed when I lost, A Woman was there to offer a shoulder: My Girlfriend
I needed a companionship & love, A Woman was there for me: My Wife
I became tough, A Woman was there to melt me: My Daughter
When I will die, A Woman will be there to absorb me in: My Motherland
If you are a Man, value every Woman.
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If you are a Woman, feel Proud to be one.
27 blandishes:
Wonderfully put Ria... This is very much useful.. I am proud to be a 'Female.'
beautiful :) Ria u always put such magical words :)
yeah.. am proud to be a woman :) .. And yeah, beautiful thought written so creatively..
all true..women should be respected and loved
Thanx Tanvi! :)
SG: I am glad u liked it dear. :)
Ann: Glad u feel that way. Thnx for commenting. :)
Beanizer: Thanx for the kind words. :)
awww...we want more men like that...
correction...we want ALL men like that Ria:-)
I agree with suruchi ria..
Proud to be a women:)
Suruchi: Oh yes yes we want! :)
Neeha: Thanks for the comment! :)
woweee - this makes me so proud!
DD: Yes hun!! We shud be proud of what v are. :)
thoughtful lines
like it
thanks sm! :)
Beautifully put! :) Good one Ria! :)
only if all men were that honest about how wonderful women are,the worldwould be a better place..
wow..loved the line about being a daughter
wonderful! yes i m proud to be a female!
Thnx Tanvi! :)
Meher: What u hav said is so true!
Thanx Sulagna. :)
Deepika: Glad that u said that. :)
Very well written !! can I use it ?!!
:-)
""Let get laughter way out of yourself
Make the happy sound awake
Laughter magic and enchanting
Don't sustain it in your soul
Let yourself go into joy
May it help forever
People from wherever
Getting circled together
Laughter can be a kind of help
A worthy enemy to distress
Rise this laughter so dear
To be heard by human ears
Make it go on around the world
Little chuckles happy giggles
So many ways of laughing
Don't fear the others comment
Let laughter way out of yourself
Be assured laughter is magic
Open your heart to this very
Very special kind of sound
Let get laughter way out of yourself
Make the happy sound awake ""
***love withg joy****
I love the poem.... :):):) Proud to be a woman!
Hey Ria!
Ayesha here! I was hoping to get in touch with you... I work with a PR firm and would like to speak to you.. Tell me how to get in touch.
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