My recent visit to Red Cross split my heart into pieces.. That just inspired me to scribble a few lines.. Warning: I am a "no-poet" guys!!
I am a girl...
The first ray breaking the dawn,
The smiling dew drop in the morning,
The fragrance of the flowers,
The dim moonlight at nights....
Weaving dreams in colours of rainbows,
An artist's inspiration,
Direction to a lost soul,
A daughter, a sister,
A friend, a wife,
A soothing mother....
The heights of Kalpana and Sunita,
The velocity of PT Usha,
The strategies of Indira,
The struggles of Medha,
The strengths of Arundhati and Jhumpa...
Dad's Senorita,
Mom's angel,
Abandoned in a dust bin,
Scratched by strays,
Synonym for devotion,
Craving for affection...
Please save the girl child from foeticide and being abandoned.
P.S. Originally posted a while ago at my blog.
15 blandishes:
its wonderful!!!!a commendable post.its ironic that a girl,being epitome of love,is pining for her right to live.
hats off to this piece..
at femme,its one of the best posts i'v come across...
very very veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy rippin off!
sometimes i hate being a girl. i feel the prejudice and i wanna come out of my skin and evolve into something better and much more powerful.
it is beautiful how you have posted!
it makes me Proud :)
and you think you are a 'no poet'??
Richa, its like a really awesome poem...
very well done!!!
the words are beautiful and really touching...
sensing the feeling when u wrote the lines...!!
yeah, many a times this world is cruel to the fairer sex..
i am proud of my mother, my girl, my sisters and every other friends..!! Without woman creed there is no existence..
it was so touching.. I am so proud of you to have written this..! lovely!
@ Anwesa
thnx for the compliment, but i wud say, it is not a post i shud be proud of to write..
I really despise female foeticide and abandoning. i wish there was a magic wand in action tht had set things all right..
@ Seher
yeah i know what u mean.. but beibng girl is blessing too :)
though there are so many less blessed girls who really in true senses repnet being a girl..
@ Jinxed Pixie..
:)
it really is what came to my mind.. i dun write poetry and dun even read :D
but this post is really heartfelt..
@ Phoenix
thnx sweets, i know u too feel it :)
@ Vinz
thnx man, ur words made me feel better. thank god for making males who respect the fairer sex.. or there are many who refer to us as the weaker sex..
@ Pink Orchid
thnx girl.. :)
That was beautful! You're a fantastic writer.
Tht was so touching!!i hope ppl read this and take a leaf from this page.
Nicely done. :)
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